Prophesy Paper #1 Feedback

Good news - the prophesy paper was well received, although I need to resubmit with references. I didn't keep a log of the research I did so I'll need to retrace my steps.
I did get some confidence that I was on the right track with the concept, which will make #2 a little easier.
I enjoy writing and wish I had more time for it (or took more time for it).